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| yayawhynot89 2007-08-23 ch 36, | forget all of the haters i freakin love this fic. :) |
| iKo*sinR 2007-03-10 ch 7, | the republican stereotyping based not on politics but your own assumptions is not cool either. and this is coming from a bush-hating libertarian. and the fernando convo? take it out. it's not funny, and no one takes an ignorant author seriously. |
| iKo*sinR 2007-03-10 ch 1, | is this meant to be a copy of meg cabot's All-American Girl? plagiarizing's not cool, kiddo. |
| Mechanical Dolls 2006-08-25 ch 19, | I've never watched 'So Called Life', but I watched a bit of OC. I can't believe she likes that show! *gasp* I prefer Lost. *wink* Anyhoo! On with the readings! -MD |
| Mechanical Dolls 2006-08-25 ch 15, | I read to this chapter, saw your author's note, and in my curiosity, I decided to check out your reviews. So, to the reviewers: Really, that's kinda silly saying these kind of things. People are entitled with their own beliefs, and as it is, this character - who happens to be writing a DIARY - happens to hate Republican and maybe stereotypical. But it doesn't matter, because I think this is a very good story, and extremely in character. Now, back to the author. I love the story and how well it flows. It's written as a diary, so I really dig the shortness and everything since it's not -really- written as a story. It's realistic, and I hope you keep up the great work. Reading on... -MD |
| camille 2006-05-22 ch 2, | You're a moron. |
| Vivian LeFaye 2005-11-14 ch 2, | Haha. This chick sounds so much like me...scary thought. Great job, Caryn. |
| kumquatt 2005-10-30 ch 36, | Your story was alright, but I'm not in so much for the short diary chopped up stuff. The characters weren't so realistic, and including so much obsession with bands kind of ruins the story for me. |
| Amopet4 2005-10-21 ch 15, | And you don't like the White Stripes.*throws up hands in exasperation* |
| Amopet4 2005-10-21 ch 11, | *blink*And what is WRONG with being a Republican?You go on and on about being 'different,' but you steriotype EVERYONE. Alicia is condemned by her clothes and her accent.The Riens are condemned for being Republicans.Do you even know any? Cause they're not all like that.For someone who promotes freedom of speech, you sure are biased against those who don't agree with you.Besides, your story lacks character development and plot. It is badly written, and uninteresting. The main character is frankly one of the most annoying people I have ever heard of. Her life sucks because her parents didn't let her bring 50 pairs of shoes and because some famous guy isn't her boyfriend? Boohoo. You know, by your reckoning, I suppose 99.99% of the world must be suicidal with grief.And, this girl who despairs about not having five hundred shoes insults Republicans because some of them wear better clothes than she does? Newsflash: Not all conservatives are filthy rich.Besides, all rich people buy nice clothes. What's wrong with that? I mean, if you've got the money, why not spend it? Keeping it under your bed kills the economy-- it's the reason for the stock market crash and the Great Depression.I mean, I may not agree with a certain political party, but insulting them like THIS is just stupid.it doesn't make you seem 'cool.' it just highlights your ignorance. Grow up. |
| Generik 2005-10-05 ch 36, | Wangsty teen heroine with no real obstacles? Check. Cliche ridden plot? Check. Boring unrealistic characters? Check. Useless name dropping and labeling? Check. I checked your story out because it got nominated in the LJ FictionPress Review community. There were a few interesting comments about your story and I wanted to see if they were right. And they were. Your characters are the most irritating things I've encountered in a while. Hayley is really spoiled and frankly annoying. Her life sucks because she has no 'boobs', has never had a boyfriend and is a virgin? Oh, woe is her. You'd think with all the complaining she does, her life was ripped apart by Godzilla and she was relocated on Pluto. But no. And she doesn't want to be 'normal'? What part of listening to some of the most popular bands is abnormal? At first I thought if Hayley was boring, maybe everyone else would be interesting. I read on, and was proved wrong. Just the way I was proved wrong when I thought if I read on, your story would get better. |
| Vivian LeFaye 2005-10-05 ch 1, | this chick has issues |
| Plavilu 2005-10-03 ch 36, | Automatic Message- Your story has been Recommended and Reviewed in the followingLivejournal community: http://w.livejournal.com/community/fp_review/ Good Job! :) - -[the mod] |
| CuteButPsycho27 2005-09-21 ch 11, | OH MY GOD! I LOVVE INCUBUS! Absolutely love them..and when I read the part about them in this chapter, I actually squealed..yep, I did. hehe..I'm pathetic, I know. Well, this is a kewl story. I'm gonna keep on reading |
| Shaina 2005-08-25 ch 36, | Aww. I really fell in love with this story! lol PLEASE update soon! |