cool story update soon.

Haven't read plays on FP before.. I always thought they were better produced than read. However, I amused myself and read it out loud. The scenes seems quite simple, mainly intent to introduce characters and character opinion. Whilst a good thing, there was little direction illustrated.

This play sounds so familiar. The bit about trying to find a rhyme... I've heard it from somewhere I just can't think where...

AH IT'S ME! TAY! AND YOU ARE AMAZING!for real girl i love your writing style. you are such an inspiration to me. i miss u too. MWAH.

Dude. I should have come here before. This is soo incredibly good! I think you had an old version of it up before, and it sounded interesting, but you had deleted it or something when I tried to check it so I thought it didn't exist anymore... !! But this is soo good! I can really see it happening.. Have you heard of '4.48 Psychosis'? Well.. hmm. Ok, that was a pointless question.. Just that I could imagine the people I saw in that (who I also know personally) doing Terror Arts and it would be so cool! I can't wait for more! How much have you written of it? It all just seems to flow and.. you've just written the lines all really well. :)
Thank you,
Munku-JGSPTV ^_^

Personally, I think that this is really good. I suggest continuing your work. Great story, good writing, and just overall good job. Congratulations.
Magician the Pazu

i recommend writing this not as a play. from the summary it sounds like an awesome story, but the style turned me away.