 Nathan Ridge 2006-11-28 . chapter 1interesting. poor jimmie, he never gets to play with you again...*cries*...at least you can be sure jimmie won't go hungry. |
 Obake-chan13 2006-08-29 . chapter 1Well, it's unique, I'll give you that. I've never read a poem about a balloon before. ^_^ |
 fearphobic 2005-07-07 . chapter 1aww poor jimmie balloon...kinda makes me wonder how some of my frnds might feel if i forget them for a while...
great poem!! loved it... |
 simpleplan13 2004-02-26 . chapter 1aw very random, but sad... one line didnt make sense
Waiting for me to come home, he waits every day for me to come home.
unless you meant for the repition |
 deathless aspiration 2004-02-26 . chapter 1This poem was sad in a funny sort of way. Kind of hard to explain it. But I do feel sorry for that poor balloon :( |