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| Nathan Ridge 2006-11-28 ch 1, | abuseinteresting. poor jimmie, he never gets to play with you again...*cries*...at least you can be sure jimmie won't go hungry. |
| Obake-chan13 2006-08-29 ch 1, | abuseWell, it's unique, I'll give you that. I've never read a poem about a balloon before. ^_^ |
| fearphobic 2005-07-07 ch 1, | abuseaww poor jimmie balloon...kinda makes me wonder how some of my frnds might feel if i forget them for a while... great poem!! loved it... |
| simpleplan13 2004-02-26 ch 1, | abuseaw very random, but sad... one line didnt make sense Waiting for me to come home, he waits every day for me to come home. unless you meant for the repition |
| deathless aspiration 2004-02-26 ch 1, | abuseThis poem was sad in a funny sort of way. Kind of hard to explain it. But I do feel sorry for that poor balloon :( |