this was simply brilliant! I adored it - I really like your style of writing.

my my, are you feelingf alright *tales temperature* YAY, you wrote something happy ^_^
hee hee. So nice. I love it. *fells all happy*

I love it.. it has such a nice feeling to it. Well done.

Aww, cute. Foofyness is never a problem. I like it cause at first you have no idea what's going on, and then you figure it out. I don't think she even has to be dreaming-it could be all happening in real life. But it's not a bad thing.

Aw... so sweet. It's nice foofyness. It's funny too, you think she's somewhere special and then it turns out she's looking at a bubble. Foofyness is good.
Oh, and sorry about the cliff-hanger but I got writers block. My friend helped me get over it though, and a new chapter will be up shortly.