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| Khali Draegan 2006-02-02 ch 1,  | abusedamn...thats about all i can say i think...it was beautiful, truthfull...it kinda hurts to think about it... |
| Anna178 2005-01-16 ch 1, | abuseThis is ** brilliant, you really captured the emotion of what someone like that would feel. i came to check out your stuff cuase I was looking through some reviews people me (yes, that's how bored I am) and saw you and said "What the Hell." I'm glad I did. I'd put you on my fav author list but I don't have anymore room on it...so this will just have to go on my fav story lst. |
| idontknowwhoiamanymore 2004-10-30 ch 1, | abuseI think it's really amazing how you've captured so many emotions in this poem. You have managed to express that feeling that so many women have of wanting, no, needing to be desired. Then once the task has been accomplished, the overwhelming sense of grief and regret sets in because it's at that point that the realization kicks in. All the man desired was a warm body. Amazing work! |
| Bleeding Ink 2004-04-12 ch 1, | abuseThat is pretty sad.. Those few hours of fun, but then nothing is really there.. I like this poem. It is so beautifully described. The atmosphere.. the girl... I absolutely adore poems with good descriptions. I think I shall add this to my favorites. For, I like the wording and the meaning. ^_^ |
| a-Leng 2004-03-16 ch 1, | abuseIt's so sad...makes me feel sorry for her. |
| Aryante 2004-02-29 ch 1, | abusei really loved the title! So then i HAD to check it out! And I'm glad I did, not many people I've met have written anything like this! and it's excellent the way you've done it! |
| artemis astralstar 2004-02-26 ch 1, anon. | abusethe last line cutsw down all the beauty of the rest of the poem so well. great poem, well done! |
| A. Bush 2004-02-26 ch 1, | abuseI really thought your wording was well placed. |