This was rather suprising for me. Me: How on earth can you make chemistry and love work in a poem without getting all technical about it? *clicks link* O_o Oh.
It's a wonderfully, aptly written poem by a poet of staggering potential. *beams* I love the structure, and I love your calm, literal yet very beautiful writing style. I agree very much with Plato's Optic Runaway's review on this.

MM, nice! I like the analogy of love to life, to chemistry, to science. It transforms the illogical, love, emotion, into the logical, the orderly, into reality: science, reason. I just love how it comes out.

christians are hypocritic too ya doofus

Very original. I really like the chemistry analogy. There's so much unrest and tension tucked beneath the verses. Good job.
Would you consider reading "Disarmed"? I'd like to hear from you. Please? :)