Beautiful haikus. I like the last stanza where the pain is on the outside and not on the inside anymore but with the pain all the speaker's emotions flowed out as well. Well done.

This is wonderful. It makes me sad to read it, beautifully as you have voiced it, especially the third haiku stanza, I can picture the situation so vividly. The last haiku stanza is awesome. It is so true. I know what you're talking about. Perfectly expressed. ;-;

That's quite twisted, but I suppose it does get the message across.

This is absolutely beautiful. I loved it. I really liked the last haiku/stanza thing...Great job!
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