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| Ash Lee Brodford 2004-04-30 ch 1,  | abusereally nice! its almost like a song. 2 new poems up under me please read! Ash Lee |
| the matrix has me 2004-04-18 ch 1, | abuseI didn't really understand this poem. I don't really have any ideas to contuine Evil You. I wouldn't know what to write. |
| Eric 2004-03-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseI liked the poem a bit short and not very much meaning tho. Like you should go into more detail. I think like if you explained more of how they make you feel rather than what they are it would be better. |
| Nat Rich 2004-03-21 ch 1, | abuseDon't be so ** yourself, It was good! It actually just snowed here, and then right after I read your poem the sun came out! Imagine that! How wierd lol. Overall, it was very good. Keep writing! -Nat Rich |
| Juliet Squared 2004-03-20 ch 1, | abuseActually, I liked this. Sunsets are beautiful, and you at least made an effort here. A good effort. Nice. |
| Drowning Rooster 2004-03-07 ch 1, anon. | abuse*big grin* aw! sweet. i'm Drunken Rooster's sister. Thanx for reviewing his fic! ^_^ |
| CRIMS0NKNIGHT 2004-03-01 ch 1, | abuseIt's simple, but I know it has a deeper meaning only you know. Don't ever think your poems aren't good. |
| PhatKat 2004-02-29 ch 1, | abuseumm..interesting |
| Caladai 2004-02-29 ch 1, | abuseNice. I like the way it's written. Good job. ^_- |
| Heartless Soul 2004-02-28 ch 1, | abuseI actually like this poem because it gives a sense of happiness and saying that the sunset is always going to be there no matter what happens as if it's something to look foward to.It's one variable that can't change in life.Don't be so ** yourself.If instint says to write it then don't hold back.You never know what can come from pure emotion.Keep writing like this. |
| Sylphiel08 2004-02-27 ch 1, anon. | abuseuh...it is a little interesting, but i still like it! but then, i like all of your stuff *grin* well, i still like it! ~Jess |
| Puff2978 2004-02-26 ch 1, | abusei think this is a cute poem. it's nice and gentle and speaks to the heart. good job! |
| sguitar103 2004-02-26 ch 1, | abuseThis is really not as bad as you might asume. I like it. It is a little ruff on the edges, but that doesn't make it bad. In fact it add's a little character. It simple but to the point. I would only suggest that next time you might consider going into slightly more depth. In all I do like it. Keep writing! |
| cookiemonster 2004-02-26 ch 1, | abuseit was cute..a little repetative, but thats a type of writing that a lot of people take for granted it was ok Henna |