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| The Zaniak 2004-12-17 ch 1,   | I liked it. Presumably with a tune it would sound much better, but it's quite enjoyable just reading it. My favourite part was "Show me who you are, And I'll show you my soul. Tell me you are mine, And I'll tell you things untold." Very poignant, and I think that bit is rather brilliant. |
| nahjan (not logged on at th... 2004-04-19 ch 1, | another great poem .. =) |
| Schubiegirl 2004-03-11 ch 1, | This is really pretty, reminds me of a song because of the repeated chorus. This is really thoughtfull. Good job! |
| amethystdawn 2004-03-04 ch 1, | Add a nice little tune and you'll be famous. ^_~ Lyrics are great and it makes me want to jump around while hugging a pillow. |
| Ephemeral Angel 2004-02-28 ch 1, | Hihi! Nice song, too bad you can't put the tune there too...sigh, oh well. |