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| smellslikerainbows 2005-07-30 ch 2,   | So far, it's a bit too surreal to follow. I like all the gorgeous imagery and confusion between reality and what I hope is the product of her mind, but there is, for the moment, too much left unsaid. I am intrigued by where this is leading; verry intrigued. Do you plan on adding to it? |
| Just Wolf 2004-03-18 ch 2, | the descriptions of the cat and mirror was wonderful, really powerful. added to the mystery that edges its way through this. write more! |
| Just Wolf 2004-03-18 ch 1, | i loved the ending. everything was mysterious and murky and painful, like closing your eyes and seeing endless red sparkles. this was really beautiful; so intriguing, poignant, i want to know just as much as i don't |