dammit all these people not taking anonymous reviews... anyways... i love this poem. i used to feel the same way... all my friends falling in love and me just sitting there like a ROCK -; but now i think i've finally fallen for it... except there's a 4 year age gap between us -0- the great irony of life...

i can totally relate to the last bit of the poem, where you say that you're jealous/envious of all the happy people. I feel exactly like that too, though I kno I probably shouldn't.

I can totally relate to this poem. It's almost like you read my mind or something. I also liked this poetry format. That had to take a lot of time to perfect. This was really nice and an emotional piece. Great job, TTFN.

i feel the same way. you successfully touched the reader... _ keep writing cause your good! *gives thumbs up*

I love the effect you achieved with "FALLING"- it really emphasizes your point.