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Reviews For: The Grendel Inside
saccharine lust aerial 2004-11-24 . chapter 1
I love your works. They're so wonderful and flowing. You put an old Shakespeare-ish spin on them, but a spark of modern poetry that makes your poems crackle with life and beauty. Keep writing. Also, even though you do write a lot of rhyming poems, I would like a non rhyming one. I think that your writing potential would be stretched greatly with that sort of a poem. Thanks.
Infinite Smiles 2004-03-18 . chapter 1
Eating alive the poor mark
Whose heart you set on fire.
Those last lines are just brillinat. Well done.
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