 Mousey-Boi 2004-08-08 . chapter 1Aw sweet, Angels. ^-^ I like so far, highly approve. Do we get to see more? Little kiddies are cute!
Though, I do believe having an Angel say 'Okay' to another is a bit... Childish? I'm not sure what the word is I'm thinking of. Well, I don't think Angels say okay, haha. So, change that and I'd like it a whole lot better.
I'd also like it a whole lot better if you updated this. *Hint! Hint!* |