continue already...lol. So far so good. BUT I WANT MORE!! Guess what! I'm actually going to get that job lol!! Call me l8r

Good- but the first, like, 3 sentences have grammatical errors. Would Parkway be capitolized cause it's a school? "With the smells of marijuana, and the occasional couples exchanging saliva in the middle of the hallway, but for one lovesick sophomore, this was all a plus." Kinda confusing sentence there. But I like the part about how reality slapped her in the back of the head; funny. Keep it up- good beginning.