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| poet tree 2005-05-21 ch 1, | abuseWhy was he in the hole? Who were the demons? You left a few questions unanswered, but even without them, the story was powerful and chilling. |
| m maldonado 2004-08-28 ch 1, | abuseWell-written, gruesome, sounds...familiar, somehow. I do believe I've heard of events liks this before...I just...can't seem to place it... hrm... ~m |
| Endless Nightmares 2004-02-28 ch 1, | abuseVery nicely written, very descriptive, and I liked it. Very good! WHispers In Silence |
| kurai-kitsune 2004-02-28 ch 1, | abuseHoly hell, dude! Okay, I liked the part about "It is cruel how the body can live on long after the soul is dead." that was pretty nice, and then the whole paragraph about god leaving you in a dirt box (hehe)Another thing, I'm an insomniac! Well, anyway, once again, a nice piece. Luv you, Blackfire ps. I might IM you sometime if you're on. I'm under a few different screennames. bye now |