that's really sweet... i wish someone would ever write something like that about me

How nice! I wish my b/f would write me a poem. Just oncek I seriously hope he will, but "sighs". Anyway, I like it. Shows your devotion to a particular girl and the whole poem touched my heart in the sweetest of ways.
Great work.

aw that was really sweet. I liked it! Great job! i would love your opinions on some of my writings.

that's some deep devotion

Love and passion... blah. It gets in the way of everything.
And I don't know what I'm saying. Usually I consider myself the romantic type, so maybe I'm just tired.
Good poem though.