And he shouts with his last breath'Forgive them Father, they know not what they do.'- i don't like that, because i think he probably said that in more of a whisper. He was in excrutiating pain and physically very than that, great poem. It flows much better than your others that i have read, and it full of your deep love for the Lord.

You watched 'The Passion of Christ', didn't you? I went and saw that with my youth group, and I've never cried so much at a movie. It was heart wrenchingly painful. No one should have to go through all that pain and suffering.
Sao

that was good. good poem.
lucian'schick