A very well written piece of prose- nicely chosen metaphors too which make this one of my favourite of your poems.

aw pretty. I like how you broke up the prhases, sentences ...w/e u call them ;; yea. lol but it was a sweet poem. *nods* thankies for reviewing my poem ::smiles:: thanks for review and sending ur love, i may not know you...but it's not insignificant because it made me smile _ *sigh* yea, my friend who i wrote that about is alive, thank goodness ::smiles:: _ bye.

one never really does no that was awesome r&r my work