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| Get Lucky 101 2004-08-03 ch 2,   | is this going to be continued? ^^ love yah always Mo |
| Get Lucky 101 2004-08-03 ch 1, | OMG!! omg o_o, scary * shudder* ^^ love yah always Mo D |
| melissa stevens 2004-05-05 ch 2, | very good you might be able to spice it ip more but excelent |
| Tipped 2004-03-13 ch 1, | oh... creepy and saweet. *sits glued to computer till someone updates* |
| Kumori Ryuuzaki 2004-02-28 ch 1, | Okay, since this isn't my story and all, I just wanted to review because I like it so far. ^_^ It's really great, but I'm a sucker for this kind of stuff. -_-; BTW, Shoujo's Revenge? The words stuck together is my fault, but I'll fix it. ^_^ |
| LiCkInG-My-WoUnDs 2004-02-28 ch 1, | You don't mind if I point out some mistakes right? Fourty-five is correctly spelled 'forty-five' Aki's entry towards the ending has some words stuck together (i.e thatstruck the flesh and a few more) But besides that everything seems to be fine. I like that Rina seems to be like most depressed people that just eats their sorrows away. I also like that Rina and Jake seems to be normal siblings because Rina seems to hate some things that Jake does. |