Very...wow! I absolutely loved it. Still do, as a matter of fact, and have decided that, when my printer works, to put it either on my wall or on my ceiling. That way I can enjoy it when ever I please. Reading this, what I assume is a poem, makes me regret not reading your stuff more, and I appologize. Please continue the awesome work. Also, how did you come up with this idea? I would really like to know. ~DansMandy

I like the soul your work conveys. You seem to have a lot of feeling and meaning in this poem. Although its message seems a little lost, I can't tell whether it was "virgin suicide" or murder, or rape. Other that the confusion of meaning, this is a very powerful peace.

that was so amazing! I love how some lines rhyme and some dont...it gives such an elegance to your writing. Thanks for reviewing.

I read all of your fics even though i didnt review but WOW!
i love them i totaly understand i am going through some stuff right now and those make everything seem to go away so keep up the greatness

Your a great at writeing, but that was terrible. The poem kind of smacked me if you know what i mean.
great work

Wow, bluntly put. Very well done. Like the theme of the "virgin girl suicide" kind of thing. Don't know what else to say but good writing.
Jenna xx

Well written once again. I think I can really understand how you felt about the situation... Loves

that was really good! sorry I didnt reply earlier, fiction press is kinda going skrewy and isnt tellin me when it you are updating and i got like 5 reviews that were all the same and i never got other reviews so ya just a bit weird!

Wonderfully written...Its sad but things like this happen. They diserve to be written about.
Keep writing...

sad and depressing but a good write.