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Kratrz 2006-02-26 ch 20,	abusew0w. i'm pretty sure this is an error. you wrote Once inside, Jay took off his shirt and jeans, leaving him in his boxer shorts, and stretched out across the bed. I smiled at him and layed down next to him, feeling all warm and tingly when he wrapped his arms around me. He kissed my cheek and then reached over and grabbed the remote control off the bedside table. After turning the television on, he began flipping through the channels. yea, i'm pretty sure it wasn't supposed to say Jay. and good story btw. nice til teh end.
Clara 2004-12-03 ch 20, anon.	abuseHey! Great story - I hope you update soon!
plastic figurine 2004-09-05 ch 20,	abusei started reading this awhile ago (its so long!) and finally finnished it. wow. i love it so much. mitch seems so great and harley was such an **!! please please update soon!
Sullivan Pegan 2004-08-28 ch 20,	abuseSorry that I've only reviewed once, but for awhile my reviews weren't being submitted. Your story's progressing very well, and you're doing a very good job continuing with it. Keep updating.
Aphrodides 2004-08-05 ch 20,	abuseWhat is going to happen next? I'll find out if you update more often!
Narinoc 2004-07-20 ch 19,	abuseWOW, this story is getting better and better! I'm rather curious about what's happening to Meghan (and have a terrible suspition I won't share). And BTW, will Jay and Tina get together?
WolfDemoness89 2004-07-06 ch 19,	abuseheheh cuteness! MUAHAHH need.. more...
Aphrodides 2004-06-30 ch 19,	abuseYou updated!:) Good chapter! Update again!!
Narinoc 2004-05-23 ch 15,	abuseHmm, I kind of expected her father to die when we first heard about his illness. Then he survived, and I thought he was safe. Obviously, he was not. :-) Anyway, your story is just as interesting and well-written as at the beginning, so I hope you plan to do many-many more chapters! Narinoc
WolfDemoness89 2004-05-15 ch 14,	abusecliffhanger :yelling: WHHY WHY A CLIFFHANGER even tho i kno what it is..this story is great! im like loving all your stories,but ive been reading for about 4 hours a ton of stories and i need to run around before i become a reclouse.. eh heh but please update soon ! O.O thanks for reviewing btw ^.^ -Rach
madmadmaddymad 2004-05-07 ch 14,	abuseOh no! Norah's father died, didn't he?!?! Or... maybe it was... Harley?!?!? I hope it WAS Harley, because that would make me happy. Heh. Good story!
madmadmaddymad 2004-04-18 ch 12,	abuseI really like your characters, they all just seem so real! Like, I can relate Norah to one of my best friends and Mitch to one of my guy friends... I guess what I'm trying to say is you've created believable characters, and that's an important factor in a good story. Oh and um... Harley needs to die! You must kill him off! He sucks!
madmadmaddymad 2004-04-15 ch 3,	abuseExcellent! I sense drama on the way from Meghan... and is it just me, or is Mitch acting rather jealous? True, I haven't read the whole thing yet, but I thought I'd review after this chappie and tell you what I think. So far, I'm liking it! I'm going to read the rest when I have more time... alrighty, good luck, and keep writing!
S Beth 2004-04-12 ch 11,	abuseVery late at night, but read the chapter and thought I would drop a quick note- DJ sounds like an absolute sweetheart, and hopefully her dad will be okay.. Nice bittersweetness with Charlie and Matt! -S Beth
Narinoc 2004-04-12 ch 10,	abuseKeep writing, this is still very interesting :-) I was being anxious if you planned to do something cruel to Norah and Mitch (they seemed just too happy together to stay like that), and I'm relieved their relationship remained unhurt :-)

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