Wow. This is really good. If you have read the book "Night," by Elie Weisel, then check out my poem, Tziporah. Thanks! Great work!

Once again you've provided insight and done it with style. Like another reviewer said: "Effin' awesome." For once I can say I have absolutely no disagreement with you. I 100% loved the message here. My only problem was the layout. I felt it could have been divided up a bit, like other reviewers said and perhaps the repetition could have appeared elsewhere earlier on, just to balance it out more. I disagree though that it was bumpy and inconsistent (apart from the singular use of repetition). A fine piece of work, as usual!

I think this is an amazing piece. When I turn on teh TV and look at the personalities of America I some times feel discouraged or disgusted. You writing seems to put into clear view what others can't quite see. Kep on writing.
Orien

A refreshing style and topic(s)
I liked this a lot.

Effin' awesome.

wow, that was excellent

I'm sorry to say that I don't like this very much. I understand that I may have a bias view since I disagree with you, but I just don't like the flow of it too much. Do you know what I mean?

I don't think I entirely understand the holocaust pulp thing, but I guess that's not entirely important.
You use some good, creative wordplay in this poem, but the rhythm is kind of bumpy and changes. I think this definitely needs space and needs to be separated into stanzas. I also think you could end it better than the way you did. Its the reptition at the end that doesn't play a role elsewhere in the poem that sticks out to me.
Maybe the questions would do better between stanzas in another version?
Just some thoughts..