whoa! lmao! this is hilarious! hahahahha. ok wow...im not not sick person who thinks killing people his like funny or anything but the style and format of your writing was just...it just cracked me up! wow..please update sooN!
*claps* LOL! A bit morbid, but I like the main character. Everyone had their bad side, and hey, it was what her boyfriend wanted...^_^ Great intro, it really grabbed my attention. Keep up the good work!
^_^LionRose
It's endearing, almost, in a psychotic kind of way. And funny. Very funny. Almost any girl put in that situation would think along the same lines, but this one just got to carry it out.