deep. i like! i like how you are writing about everyday life, in this sense.good job!

-Rachel Morgan.

P.S. thanx for reviewing! much appreciated :) i'm hoping to find a publisher for shadows of the night. when i do, i'll take it down

cute peom about never excelling but never giving up^^ I love the discription in it,
love yah always
Mo

B-kun!
Aw... I never knew you felt like THAT, B-kun... *eyes water* You know, I AM here to listen...
Your feeling in this poem, it was... "worded" in the right way. This gives the reader a day in your life, I suppose...
Wonderful.

cool! i didnt really see you as this type of guy on woi but oh well
very deep, you hit great points and got me in the heart- i luv it, great job!!

Whew! I rarely review poems and stuff... but you're quite good at this. Add a little chords, create a good rhythm and I think that this would also be good lyrics for a song. Is this like about your personal troubles - something that's bothering you with DBT (writer's block)? Maybe you just need a little break to gather up your thoughts?

Anyway, I do hope that you get out of this little slump. Everyone has them nowadays, just forge on and keep on improving (although I think that you're pretty superb the way you are). Play with your mind and imagination or turn that thing that's bothering you and try to channel it for the good! Yoh can doh it! -> (Ala Waterboy)

P.s. And BTW, what happened to rosie and moni? Haven't heard from them in WOI for quite some time.

Wow.
This is powerful -- and personal. And relatable. I feel like I'm reading you writing my mind sometimes. Quite a feeling when words just won't come to explain the emptiness the settles at the pit of your stomach - it's the lowest of lows, especially when it's the topper on an already horrificly terrible mood.
I hope your writer's block on DBT cures soon - i really can't wait to read more! I'm about to be done with the school musical, and thus have (gasp!)free time again. And I still hold that you are one of the most talented writer's I've ever had the pleasure of reading =)
Thanks also for the recent review of the Stone. I'm glad you're still enjoying it! I'll try to keep updating. Good luck to you!
~Lapis~