 Seemingly Pointless 2008-11-25 . chapter 3i love it! :) |
 Seemingly Pointless 2008-11-25 . chapter 1lol, i think there names came from two famous wolves that farmers hated, si? |
 Fido La Canadienne 2007-06-21 . chapter 3This is absolutely adorable! I don't think there's a part in this story where I haven't aww!'d out loud ^^
I wish I could write something as cute like this... *no envy here, I swear* :D
Please continue~ |
 crissy 2006-06-04 . chapter 3very different from what I am use to but i like it. |
 Deadles 2006-05-07 . chapter 3Why haven't you made a new chapter for this story? I love it screw Tarzan and Jane, and hell Blanca and Lobo, if you ever continue this story, I would be so happy and well happy. This was a great chapter and to say th least it made me cry...yes cry. Well that all I have to say. |
 Spawn of Hell 2005-07-12 . chapter 3nice... i like lil wolf boy. write more ? plz? |
 Obake-chan13 2005-07-03 . chapter 3Dude, seriously. You should definitely continue with this one. Its awesome! |
 k.arnet 2005-06-03 . chapter 3 OMG WHY HAVENT YOU UPDATED THIS?!?! ITS SO GOOD! PLEASE UPDATE IT!:D:D:D |
 City Lights Burn Like Stars 2005-01-22 . chapter 3i like it i love it i want some more of it! ^^ update soon |
 Edana 2004-12-06 . chapter 3Well, here's another person to encourage you in writing this story because I found it extemely cute and interesting. The characters I love, especially Lobo, and how they interact with each other. I also love how you based the names off of a pre-existing story and how you brought real elements of wolf behaviour into Lobo's character and the wolves themselves. Anyway, a very cute story and I hope you update soon! |
 Pineapple Chiffon Cake 2004-11-28 . chapter 3The beginning of the story reminded me of Tarzan (since, as you mentioned, that's what inspired you) and a dash of Princess Mononoke. I love wolves to death. :: le huggle :: This chapter was so cute! I was getting that warm fuzzy feeling through the entire thing. Now you must update! Please? This goes on my favs list! yayayayay! |
 Wolfwitch 2004-08-23 . chapter 3It's really sweet. As a wolf-freak myself, I would really love to see more.
One thing I caught, though. You say the pup in the first chapter's mother was the beta female. Only alphas are allowed to mate in the pack, thusly the pup should be the alpha female's. |
 the not so good critic person 2004-08-17 . chapter 3 Cool story. ITS TARZAN! I mean lobo *cough cough* Yup. Lol, go disney movies, they make good.. erm.. uh.. *thinks* Oh I'll think of it some day. Some word that has to do with being a good helper in making these things. But I dont know the word right now. Lol |
 Dream Fox 2004-08-12 . chapter 3Aw, it's so cute! I love wolfy-boys! Please continue soon! |
 Namishka 2004-07-23 . chapter 3write more! you're not finished yet. |