Whoa. Nice. That was absolutely riveting. The little interjections of dialogue made it interesting to read and interesting to look at. Purely horrific, captivating. wow. ~Mariah

Wow, that was intense.

Well, let's see... On the upside, you are able to write about evil things without being too afraid, which is useful in writing. But I have a question: Would a father have told his wife to kill herself two days after the loss of his son? I know it's critical to the plot, but it isn't believeable.

absolutly amazing! This has to be my favorite story out of all the stories on Fiction Press. Keep up the good work. ( I would of liked it if the father would have killed himself, but the boy sorta had it coming)

oh wow... freaky. I liike it though. the only thing i didn't completely agree with was the father shooting josh. i know he was angry, but it was made pretty clear that he loved his wife more than his son. Isn't it usually the other way around? I'm thinking WAY too much into this.
Great job and great story!
~Little Monkey Child

awful, i've read a million other stories like this before, same plot and everything. I got it in a email.

WOW! This was incredible. I mean, seriously, this was a really good idea for a story. I really liked it. I had this sinking feeling in my stomach when the mom went into the room and slammed the door. I was like, "Oh Jesus, she's going to kill herself, isn't she?" Dude, this is a great story. I really mean it!!
'Slayer

oh...my...god.
(jus a lil side note: u reviewed my story so i had to read urs bc of the comment u made that we have similar stories)
I can't believe...oh my god...i so didn't expect that to happen. When i read ur summary i thought that he'd just get really grounded but omg!
real good story, short but sweet. I liked the way you cut it up into little pieces to show Josh's commentary as if he were watching the whole thing. It almost made it seem kinda poetic, since it's :cut to reality: and then :cut to josh:...real good i give u props for that...
ps i can see why u would think i copied off ur story but i really didnt! honest! lol jus for the record...lmao

Wow, that was really good. Josh is an ** hole. Insolent little prick. Well, coolness.

Hell yes, this is wicked writing. I LOVED this! I love thrillers to death, and though this was macabre and a bit disturbing (just a bit), the story is awesome and I loved how you kept switching back and forth between dialogue snippets and actual narration. And I loved how you kept echoing the title in the story, too. Anyway, great job, as usual, all I can say is, well, you've amazed me once again, and...I am NEVER going to play an April Fools' joke like that. Write more soon...please!

Woah, nice story there. Very, very scary. Sometimes there's a limit to jokes, and I guess Josh went over the limit.

Nice story. No, don't hate it, sounds a bit like something I'd do, actually. Anyway, like this a lot.