 Pastrami Sauce Camel Soup 2006-08-07 . chapter 1This totally matches my new poem! Great minds think alike, eh?
Anyway, I like this. This is everyday people; all people.
I'm often plagued with the question "How many people actually have their dream come true; or how many just settle for what they can already have?"
Everyone is out there looking. The people who actually find what they are looking for are the people who don't settle. |
 L0st.S0uL 2005-10-18 . chapter 1this is really deep.. you're a good writer keep writing |
 Naja Copperleaf 2005-08-27 . chapter 1Very romantic. I really like the phrasing in this. I also love how the object of affection doesn't seem idealized or superhuman. Well-done. ;) |
 SleepDontWeep 2004-08-19 . chapter 1WOW O WOW O WOW O WOW!
the opening line was just amazing and den as i read on it just got more intricate and well written and i was just blown away!
u really seem to have a talent!
if u cud wud u please check out my story: thats not how it happened. please it wud mean alot to me! and if u do happen to check out 1 of my poems aswell please tell me which im better at, poetry r fiction!
tanx much love and admiration for u!! |
 WolfOfBloodMoon 2004-06-16 . chapter 1I like this poem. Wow...it's been a while since I reviewed a poem let alone put one up. Feh, writer's block is a terrible thing to suffer..*sigh* Good poem, I really liked it! |
 alphazodiac 2004-03-08 . chapter 1Great style, very descriptive, I especially like the ending. |