Ah! Very carefree ^_^
Me likies!
well written too.
And I don't feel like nitpicking and I can't find anything, so whe! *cough*
~Karasu

I really liked this especially because I always hae an ache to feel alive live on the edge touch what out of reach though I'm too young to get my premit so I've never actually driven before

ok, i need to read more of your work, again... i've been so busy!
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It's a really pretty poem, and i can relate so much, reminds me of the song of the same name by Bic Runga. I can see the abandon (in a happy sense) in the person. Well written poem, well done!¬

wow...
I love this...so well done...
RNL

its kinda one of those poems... where you are just not sure because it goes flying over all of the waves.. but its good :-)