i loved it, your whole writing style, tis so.. undefined? i unno, its great, makes me happy..:P

Hmm, very interesting. This is a pretty solid poem...I can't say anything 'cept you did a great job as usual.

Wow...that was fantastic. I loved style of this one, with alternating the stanzas from the girl to the boy. The last two stanzas were great, they ended this poem perfectly. Keep up the great work!
Lsay312