that was RREALLY GOOD!

Like yikes! I saw real snakes with this one for some reason! Though I am sure they are more metaphor than true scaled creatures (I am hoping!)- very creeped out just the same. And I like snakes! Geez! *shudders and wiggles* Good work though! I like the last group of stanzas- really saw the asps 'biting'. You have a very dark mind. :-) More writing, please?!

wow, this is deep and powerful, loved it!
=summerdazed=