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| Celest Covax 2004-06-28 ch 1, | abuseI liked the blunt emotion of this poem. The fact that you stated how you felt so simply and yet the effect was powerful. Sometimes you don't have to make the poem long and drawn out to get your point across, and here, you prooved that. Well done. P.S. Thanks a bunch for your reviews! |
| Dirty Wallpaper 2004-06-27 ch 1, | abuseaww, such a sad poem :( i loved the short and incompleteness of the lines, they really added this abrupt, emotional *sounding* atmosphere to the piece which aded to the emotion of the words to just make it...lovely. great work, muchly enjoyed. kudos! P:S - thanks muchly for the review! :) |