Wow...intense and strangely addicting.

Sounds like a twisted love song, but it's cool.

Any poem that makes me think is a good one, as far as I'm concerned. I'm terrified that one day I'll be able to relate myself to this poem.

wow... filled with emotion.. real nice poem. i like its depression-ness ^_^
true, that's not a comforting thought.. you vent real well through poetry! keep writing !!

Omg this is such an amazing poem. I absolutely loved it. Absolutely fantastic, you really brought out the emotion in this one. There was a great flow and the rhyming worked very well. Every line of this poem was incredible..I could go on but you've probably had enough of me lol. Terrific job! Keep it up!
~Lsay312