:-(... what a cold way to be (or, at least, that's what it feels and sounds like when I read it)... not something a warm soul should ever feel. Makes me want to wrap it up in a blanket or something! My first reaction to the poem was.."God! How cruel... cold... not fair...". Keep writing! :-D

wow...it's so raw; and leaves so much to the imagination.

very well written and has very descriptive quality about it.