This is another great piece of poetry. I wish I could write like that. It's so sad. I especially love the last part.

First of all, thank you for reviewing my poem! It made my day.
Second of all. I love this poem! I feel like that sometimes! (That explains my morbid poetry, I guess!)
Oh, btw, shouldn't Starring have one r? I don't really know.
Well, good job!

Your style of writing is very very interesting! great work here again, I really liked how this was setted up and how it was written. great work here, keep writing!
If u can, please r and r some of my work, it will mean a lot to me
Thanks!

A refreshing change, well done. very few poems give me a gosspimpley feeling up my arms this achieved just that (I'm not strange, honest)

Ah, what a relief to find a piece, so different, and interesting. I was hooked from beginning to end. I have nothing bad to say about this. Good Job.