|Reviews for Depression|
| Getuie 4/25/12 . chapter 3
This is such an incredible image. It fits absolutely perfectly. Strong sense of desperation... which comes out even stronger when the speaker is seen as someone who knows that depths. Someone who has lost their grip before.
| alligater20 4/25/12 . chapter 3
Very nice. I like the style you wrote it in. It's a nice change from today's modern free verses and the poem itself was equally good. Nice work. )
| liscarthan-rae 4/25/12 . chapter 3
Firstly that was written beautifully. Second I love the imagery it gave me. That soft vulnrable desperation. It was sweet.
| Garethtoyah 4/25/12 . chapter 3
Nice piece of work. Captured the mood and the pain of the possibility of isolation very well
| JamieT 4/25/12 . chapter 3
I like it.
| St. Astryr of the Uncool 4/25/12 . chapter 3
Doode, that rawked. Yeah, God has kicked my depression more than a few times and I'd have this warm happy time feeling inside. Good your fluoxetine heart out, prozac! XD Nyahahaha!
| angelus . noir 4/25/12 . chapter 3
a wonderful poem that shows your devotion and your love for your Lord. it leaves me feeling warm oddly, the ending seems so optimistic amidst the angst. a lovely read though.* noelle
| mountaingurl 4/25/12 . chapter 3
Well written and the message is awesome.
| Getuie 4/25/12 . chapter 5
This poem is structured incredibly well... the similies in the first stanza building up to the declaration in the second. A masterful stroke. The words were so well planned, each extremely fitting in the way it is used. And the message... powerful and victorious.
| only a mere mortal 4/25/12 . chapter 5
woah, i love it, keep writing!
| Cesy 4/25/12 . chapter 4
Thank you. It helped me when I was down.
| Caitir 4/25/12 . chapter 4
Thank you for writing this. It truly blessed me... thank you so very very much. It just poured the love of God out to every reader. Wonderful.
| Getuie 4/25/12 . chapter 4
I've been speaking to a friend recently about many things you've mentioned in here and God has also brought it to my own heart... It's awesome how He works that He would send this piece also at this time.
"Your name engraved indelibly – a priceless scar –
Into the Hands that formed the universe" - my favourite
The bracketed parenthesis were masterfully used and the expansion on each 'statement' or 'reasoning' really opened the gates to giving a glimpse of God's love.
| TheStaticOnTheRadio 4/25/12 . chapter 4
Wow, that was incredible!
| Gleechumber 3/25/12 . chapter 2
Wow! This one is really powerful. I love the imagery you use... truly wonderful. A really original piece.