i like the "I feel blue" even though i think its a bit cliche (i use it at times too when it fits) and i think it fits...it really feels like a blues song to me so i like it

Your style of writing is very interesting and it amazes me. And this poem was I think full of urself. (I mean I dunno u, but this poem gave me da clue) Nice work, keep writing!
If u can, please r and r some of my work, it will mean a lot to me
Thanks!