Incredibly true and well-written.
-Aillil

I'll admit that I'm horrible at reviewing poetry. I'm more of a literature prose girl myself, but I agree with your opinion, and I get what your saying and I like you style so I thought I'd give it a try.
Anyway, I really did like it. Sorry I could be helpful or insightful. As I said, not very good at poetry.

wow i like the wording of this piece you wrote, i think it's great. great opening, middle and end.
thanks for reviewing me, i'm glad you liked!