Pulls up splinters in my wilting skin
is very beautiful
i liked the poem as a whole
the last line, i thought, was very fearless and frank
contrasting metaphors with reality

Hey, this has been on my favorite list since you put it up - but I hadn't got around to reviewing it till now. I love this poem so much. I know exactly how you feel. It's well written, and just so... soo... perfect. In an odd sense. I just love it so much. I know, this is a horrible review, but I hope you understand what I mean. Check out my work if you want.
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