i also called this twist. normally, i'd point out stylistic or grammatical errors, but it's obvious that you wrote this a long time ago and have grown as a writer.

i kind of saw this revelation coming... you spliced together two cliches. smart. (not sarcasm)

i have to say, this is the most unique twist on this ckiche i've come across...

*gapes at screen*

WOW.

This is fantastic! I absolutely love it! I can't wait to read more!

*adds to favorites list*

I absolutely loved your story!You are an amazing writer...but I can't believe you killed Marcie! And MAX!He was totally my favorite character!This was just so unexpectable, this whole thing...I mean even real life isn't that cruel!The deaths, the prison...Anyways, I think Sage was better off with Max.

But that's just me. X)

this story is so mucked up its not even funny - and your spelling is awful. the word used to describe the day's conditions whether its cloudy or full of sun is WEATHER.

Finally some action! :)

eh it was ok. life and court wouldnt work like that, but its alright of a story.

Pretty good actually, I was worried it would turn out into another teen drama cliche but it didn't, I'm happy Luke and Sage got together, I had a feeling they loved each other beyond petty history and circumstance all along. YAY for happy realistic endings!

I liked it. It was very unexpected and filled with suspence. I hope you will continue to keep up your good work in otherstories.

Sage is a weak woman. Luke is a sneaky bastard. A match made in heaven, I'm sure. Your story disgusts me. There's forgiveness and then there's stupidity.

great story, cya later.

I absolutely loved this story. So far its my favourite out of the ones I've read. In this story I felt such real emotion. When it came about that Max had been murdered I could have cried. It was so unexpected. I thought it was Marcie and that you'd end up putting Max and Sage together at the end of the story. I mean, I liked the idea of her with Luke but there was always that problem of him being her step brother!!

I can understand why some reviewers might have been mad - I would have if I had been reading "Unlikely Passion" chapter by chapter. However, reading it as a whole, I believe you made the right decision. It was a great story!

~Silver

hey, i thought this story was great and all..but isn't LUKE HER STEPBROTHER?? gross..sorry!

OMG!this story ROCKS!teehee.i LOVE it to bits and pieces!congrats on writing such a F-I-N-E story!