 DZ McKnight 2005-01-15 . chapter 1Congratulations on being a great poet, not just another emo-wagon jumper. I really like this, the way it's angry but also proud and controlled. And as the music teachers say, Fat Chicks Get Dates.
Yours,Diz |
 Red Masque 2004-06-27 . chapter 1You are such an amazing poet... the last stanza is so wonderful especially. I'm not sure why I like it the most... probably because of the last line. It just wraps up the poem so nicely.
Amazing
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 how do you delete accounts 2004-03-27 . chapter 1I like this even better than your latest poem!!
It has a better point. People are people; it shouldn't matter what we look like. Just because one person is more "beautiful" doesn't mean he/she should have more opportunities.
You capture this perfectly in this poem. |
 Ciara Blaze 2004-03-05 . chapter 1very well done.. and it certainly works as a poem for people who are sick of the constant nitpicking and bullying that they get simply because they're different (whether it's weight or a disability, etc.).. beautiful work. :) |
 kalede 2004-03-04 . chapter 1Wow, I like this a lot.
Nice flow, nice message. That's all you can ask for.
I especially like the last stanza. ^_^ |