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A Step in the Wrong Direction
greenbanana
2005-01-16 . chapter 1
aw, sad! a lot of people feel like that, and you did a better job of capturing those emotions than any other on that topic that I've ever read.
how do you delete accounts
2004-03-27 . chapter 1
This is good.
Not that that surprises me.
But seriously. I love the last stanza. It's the perfect ending to this poem; just the way it flows, the way you use words.
Awesome.
SiriusPolaris
2004-03-26 . chapter 1
Very nice; it captures everyday insecurities.
Apples and oranges, my friend. In the end, they're all fruit.
just to reach you
2004-03-24 . chapter 1
[sighs] That's almost EXACTLY how I feel.
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