Hiya! This is really good! Well done
Cya =)
*WG

It's sweet and cute, but it needs a bit of work.
See, what you're doing is just writing/typing words to entertain someone else, or a small simple hobby for yourself. But what you need to do is put more heart into it. A poem doesn't have to rhyme. It does not have to be all happy, or all sad. It should be deeper than that - should crescendo from a great happiness to a sadness or numbness that you describe so much as to feel and see and hear and taste, and it should emotionally and physically challenge and engulf you within itself. Try to write from your heart, and not from your hand and a vocabulary that may be in wider range or bigger use than someone else. Just please...Think about it.
Cute, though. Keep writing.
Always,
Krystal (SN: Kataerias)

no need to tell me it was a daffodil, great descriptions