awesome poem. well written, nice rhyme and the piece has a good rhythm, your words flow nicely together. also, wonderful imagery you use here, i like this. good job!

very impressive write. in this piece you let your voice and style come through in a truely fantastic way. i hope you will take some time to review some of my work as well.

*squeals*
THIS IS AWESOME!

I think it is totally awsome
It's cute

greetings from my engineering drawing and design class! lol!
i meant too write a review for this a long time ago *blushes* srry hun! anyways i really like the meter of this poem! its awesome!

Wow! This is beautiful! The picture this creates is stunning! Brilliant work!
~ CoolBeans18s