O.O

Why do I feel like I'm missing something?...

Still, very nice imagery.

Damn that was short but it really painted a eerily realistic picture. Just something about the mood and sporadic details, it all came together just right. Very impressive for something written in such a short time.

I've read all the texts you submitted on Fictionpress.com and all I have to say is you have it. You have THE true gift for descriptions...there are so real... I mean we can litteraly feel the atmosphere in this story...the solitude, the loneliness or whatever you are eloquently putting down in words for our pleasure. My only criticism...it's not long enough... and...hum... You have been really subtle about that Anne Rice thing...I can see no relations (sic). keep on working. one day...You'll have the Linus Van Pelt's unique and realist comprehension of the world.