I thank you for all the reviews! I know it's pretty wierd that I'm signing my own review thingy but hey it shows my appreciation. =P

Title: "Buried in Lies"? BTW u can write how i do..i dont care, lol

This is very sad and emotionally tragic; all this comes across very well in this piece of well written poetry.
Keep positive, no matter what else, you have the potential here for very, very good writing! :¬D
Well Done
KEEP WRITING!!
F.C
I expect to see lots more poems from you of the same good standard; if not better so there. If not then I'll send "Peter Willingham" from my "Torment" horror stories, around to ensure you dont give up. :-)
Once again well done and keep up the good work.

Don't die, please, your stuff is really good!