This is good kind of reminds me of Emily Dickinson's more morbid poems. Great imagery, I like the lines "rain of crimson blood" and "fueled the blossoming malice" Please R+R some more of my stuff! Mine is nowhere near as good as yours but I always like to have feedback. :)

reat message...Very insightful..The beginning is awesome..It grabbed my attention right away. Well done!

this flowed very nicely
i especially liked the first stanza(?)
the question asked