From the first few lines I got the impression of clouds... now I'm not sure!! haha... good job though. beautifully written... whatever it is... lol

This is pretty. It makes me think of nebulas (I think that's what they're called-those multicolored outer space gas clouds?), though I don't see how they could occur where you live.

I love it! It's fittingly mysterious. Let's see, it occurs where you live you possibly it's not everywhere...And the poem says something about marshes...could it be marsh-gas? (You know, those little bright flamies that float around...@_@) ^_^

this is beautiful! wow, i love how parts of it just fit, i unno, rhyme but dont rhyme... its nice..
Keep it up!

Whoa, I have no idea what it's about but that is an awesome poem. Great jobbo! XD

o.. I very much like this. I absolute love your word choice, so powerful, so right. Wonderful, wonderful imagery.
As to what it refers to? I would either guess clouds or wind.
Again, very good.