Wow that really gave me the chills... I like it!

Personally, this concept really doesn't appeal to me, but I will say that you managed to communicate the image efficiently (and that's always good). The only thing that snagged in the overall flow was how many times you used the word "grave". Try "crypt", maybe. -Beloved-

i like it, it doesnt speak of a realm or anythuing like that, you remain on earht, but u take a differetn form. I like it. You become a messenger. Very cool

Really cool, its just so dark, an interesting idea. well doneKeith Andrew

You're my favorite author on fictionpress, and this poem met my expectations perfectly. In my opinion, Death Becomes You should've been rated PG, but it's good to be safe.

wow this is realy good

This is very interesting. Death is such a beautiful and misunderstood subject. More people should face up to it. I like the way you write your poetry, it's really beautiful. Keep writing and never stop! ((BTW: Dragon's are so pretty! ^_^'))(( This is on my favorite's))
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~:~ Melena ~:~

very very nice. beautiful. I love the last line. this is truly amazing.

Very beautiful, even though I'm kinda used to poems which just... well how should I explain... uh, leave you hanging I think. But this is still very beautiful. If you don't mind could you please check out some of my stuff.
THANKYOU,
Shattered Butterfly

Whoa, this poem makes my head spin trying to understand it. It's really cool. Nice ending:)