   Shinsei na Ryu 2004-04-27 . chapter 3Wow...I'm not even going to say anything but...wow.You've seriously improved the detail,as well as the depth of the story.GOOD JOB,TOMODACHI!!
*Begins to grope..* whoops..XD :P |
 Sakamura 2004-03-20 . chapter 3 This chapter is cool...i wanna see more |
 Sakamura 2004-03-09 . chapter 2I like this chap...good continuation...continue please |
 ArchSaugim 2004-03-09 . chapter 2Good story, just keep posting. |
| Sakamura 2004-03-05 . chapter 1 (sry for not signing in)...this chap is awesome...I think it could be better than DwF |
 XxDarkRosexX 2004-03-03 . chapter 1Hey sis- i really liked Chapter 1. I cannot wait to read more. I love ur work- keep it up! You are hardworking and talented! Remember that! |
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