Those were really great! Short but sweet and meaningful. Keep writing!

I love the one with the God's tears...your rhymes are perfectly consistent and it doesn't seem like a bunch of different poems, but rather one poem that just jumps from topic to topic...i like it
~*Arreis Kurai*~

So sad... a very depressing description... nice...

I like them. I must say, though: they are sad.
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The Great, the Mighty, the Orc King

this one's very nice, me likes a lot. i like the second verse (i think you call it a verse) the best. good job!